#FlashFictionFriday – Vol. 27: THE FAIR DATE

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Photo prompt via pixabay

It’s week twenty-seven of the flash fiction challenge by Flash Fiction for Aspiring Artists, check out their blog and join in or read others’ posts and be inspired.

So busy with Pitch Wars, I missed last week’s challenge. I’ll have it up by tomorrow just for fun and post a link here if you’d like to read. For this week, thought I’d do something fun…hope you like creepy surprises 😉

Read mine below and feel free to leave a comment. Enjoy!

THE FAIR DATE (153 words)

Charlotte’s bright blue eyes scanned the bustling crowd and neon lights. The delicious aroma of fair delights filled her nostrils, threatening to make her mouth water. She spun around like she knew someone watched.

“Is this too much for a first date?” A pair of dark eyes peered down at her, full lips turned up in a grin.

“No, it’s perfect.”

Bernard slipped his cool fingers between hers and guided her to the Ferris wheel. They slid into their seats and away they went spinning to the sky and back down, until they stopped at the top. And then his cool lips were upon hers. She’d wanted this since the first time she laid eyes on him. Desire warmed her insides. Bernard’s lips trailed down her neck. Sweet, hungry kisses.

And then he bit her. Charlotte gasped, pleasure and fear intertwined as he fed upon her.

“Now, you are mine forever,” he said.

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15 Responses to #FlashFictionFriday – Vol. 27: THE FAIR DATE

  1. luckyjc007 says:

    I guess she has good taste…..for him anyway! Great story.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. mandibelle16 says:

    I was kind of shocked when he bit her. I wasn’t expecting that from the beginning of the story.

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  3. LOL! He is a vampire! Great twist at the end. Love it! I was expecting that at all. Hahaha! Thank you for participating in FFfAW Challenge!

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  4. I meant, I wasNOT expecting that at all. Sorry!

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  5. milliethom says:

    You certainly sprang that ending on us very effectively! I really wasn’t expecting that! So we’ll now have another vampire on the loose! LOL Well done! 🙂

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  6. EagleAye says:

    Yikers! She was dating a vampire, and now is apparently wedded to him. I love the teasing little hints you offered all through the story. That’s brilliant. In the end it all came together. I really enjoyed this one.

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  7. Ellespeth says:

    Oh my! This shows the importance of checking a person’s teeth before anything more serious happens.
    Great story

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Kabirium says:

    I bet she tastes good…

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