#FlashFictionFriday – Vol. 22: UNEXPECTED

My swan princess Photo credit: Sonya O.

My swan princess
Photo credit: Sonya O.

It’s week twenty-two of the flash fiction challenge by Flash Fiction for Aspiring Artists, check out their blog and join in or read others’ posts and be inspired. With a busy writing schedule I’ve been trying hard to keep up with my blog and have been doing the bare minimum, but I hope by mid-August I’ll be back at it. For now a romantic-themed flash fiction piece as usual inspired in more ways than one.

Read mine below and feel free to leave a comment. Enjoy!

UNEXPECTED(157 words)

Martin had never been a fan of fancy parties. Idle gossip, uncomfortable shoes, debutantes and their eager mothers. Why hadn’t he married yet? Fear of the mother-in-law—he never said that. But it was all worth it for the cigars and barrel-aged brandy.

He stepped onto the balcony. He wasn’t alone. “Pardon my intrusion.”

“Escaping?” A young woman stood in a simple white dress flared from her slender waist. A flowing white cape covering her bare shoulders. Pale skin luminescent beneath the moon. Icy blue eyes on his.

“What? Uh, yes.”

She giggled. Smitten, Martin chatted, forgetting about how much he hated these parties.

“I have to go,” she said when the night ended.

“Your name?”

“Odette.” And then she slipped through the balcony door.

Martin gave chase, losing her at the banquet table where an ice sculpture of a swan stood. Where has my swan princess gone? He mused then went off in search of her.

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8 Responses to #FlashFictionFriday – Vol. 22: UNEXPECTED

  1. HumaAq says:

    Oh sweet romance.. Good story.. Would like to know what happens next

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Wonderful love story! Mysterious girl has captured his heart and attention! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  3. afairymind says:

    A lovely story with elements very reminiscent of fairytale. I wonder whether he’ll ever find his mysterious Odette again…? Nicely done. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  4. luckyjc007 says:

    Oh! The fairytale in me is thinking his beautiful Odette is the beautiful swan ice sculpture ! Very nice story. 😐

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